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The Fire Fairy by Starwarrior4ever The Fire Fairy by Starwarrior4ever

This was a doozy! Designing the dress was frustrating but definitely worth it in the end, I’m really happy with the final piece :D   Redraw of this old thing:  Fire Fairy by Starwarrior4ever

so glowwyyyyyyy <3

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Vision: I can clearly see what you desired to depict with this piece, and it turned out beautifully.

Originality: It is an elegant fairy floating over water, and it's a combination of fire and water. These are things we've all seen before. That said, the pattern on her dress and her hair are rather unique, along with the fact that you kept red out of this piece.

Technique: You have an excellent technique. From color choice, to anatomy, to shadows and lighting, and textures. Everything is excellently done, especially the reflections and ripples in the water. My only suggestion would be to eliminate some of those lines. The upper half of her body has essentially no visible line art and it adds this sense of realism that helps pull the viewer into the piece. Use the light and shadows to differentiate between things, especially on the inside of the dress; along with the hair. Rather than line work.

Impact: For me, this piece had a lot of impact. The stark contrast makes it very intense and pulls the viewers eyes to it. Her pose guides the viewers eyes through the piece and really emphasizes the mood.

Overall, this is an excellent piece. If you work on eliminating the line work, it will add a serious sense of realism to your art. Keep it up :aww:
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Daughterofthehunt10 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is it weird that my writer brain is coming up with a story for this character, comparing the redraw with the original? ^^; Like....I can picture the original being the fairy when she's young, learning about herself and experiencing new things. Then eventually she grows and blossoms, her hair becoming flames and her wings becoming more transparent and bright. I really love this so much. It's so beautiful and the texture of the water is amazing. This piece is very soothing and relaxing and very appealing to the eye. When you compare the two pictures you can really see an improvement on your art, and you can see the hard work that was put into this. That doesn't take away how wonderful the original is. Gaaah i just love the story that the combination of both works of art show together. 
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!! <3 (and no that's not weird at all, i do that myself XD)
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DJpaigeDJ Featured By Owner Edited Mar 15, 2017
I really like the style of the dress and how it fits on her. The hair, the wings, the water, oh its all amazing! Through btw I also really like the old one!
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I appreciate all your kind words!! <3 You're such a sweetheart, thank you! <3
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DaPokemonMadster Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh WOW! This is FANTASTIC!! Man, the colors, and the wings, and the WATER RIPPLES are all absolutely incredible!! 
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:D :D thank you!! <3
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DaPokemonMadster Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome!! :D
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bleachcrater Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
lovethe glow effect
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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bleachcrater Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017
your welcome
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RedTail126548 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
This is utterly AMAZING!!!
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Aahh thank you! <3
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RedTail126548 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
You're always welcome! ^-^
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bbb35 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
So stuning and lovely! The color and brightness of her gown, her hair, standing on water and admiring herself. Exquisite!
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank youuuu :heart: 
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bbb35 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017
Welcome :)
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lisastree Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :333
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Anime-ComicFreak97 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so gorgeous! The fiery colors look great on the dark background
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Student Digital Artist
^u^ thank you!
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